Writing Shorter Legal Documents: Strategies for Faster and Better Editing by Dr Sandra J. Oster

Author:Dr Sandra J. Oster
Language: eng
Format: mobi
ISBN: 9781616329914
Publisher: American Bar Association
Published: 2012-04-15T21:00:00+00:00

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C. Revised Text, with the Lead-In Further Reduced. Total line count: 15, Total word count: 210, Total character count: 1316

1After the crash, the Emergency Locator Transmitter (ELT) transmitted a message via satellite which the USCG Command Center received. 2The ELT provided the Global Positioning Satellite Coordinates for the downed aircraft. 3The USCG HH65 rescue helicopter arrived at the scene, as did the Santa Rosa County Sheriff’s Office (SRCSO) Water Response Unit. 4The HH65 rescue helicopter crew reported that there appeared to be no one inside the wrecked aircraft. This fact was later confirmed by Sergeant (Sgt.) Ricky Perritt of the SRCSO Special Operations Unit. 5A subsequent inspection of the aircraft by Sgt. Perritt revealed that the front windshields of the aircraft were still intact after the crash. 6Sgt. Perritt and members of the Special Operations Unit also recovered several items of evidence which included: a fifty (50) state road map book, of which the states Alabama and Florida were ripped out; a book containing the campsites of America, of which the states Alabama and Florida were also ripped from the book. 7On the back of one of the books was what appeared to be a list containing bullet summary points which included: “cracked wind shield, window imploded, bleeding profusely” or words to that effect. 8Also located in the plane were Meals Ready to Eat (MREs) and other survival paraphernalia.

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